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Forum: Fan Fiction
 Topic: Looking for Beta/Constructive Criticism Thread
Re: Looking for Beta/Constructive Criticism Thread [message #1148635] Fri, 20 November 2009 10:26
Noizchild  is currently offline Noizchild  
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I just need someone to read the chaps for my new series, Ghost Doll, and help me to just nail it just right. Just to be on the safe side, of course.

Here is the link:

My e-mail is in my profile.
 Topic: When do you get frustrated with Fanfiction?
Re: When do you get frustrated with Fanfiction? [message #1148637] Fri, 20 November 2009 14:03
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I totally agree with you on the reader part.
Forum: Word Games
 Topic: Heaven and hell...
Re: Heaven and hell... [message #1148614] Fri, 20 November 2009 00:23
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Heaven: Getting back to work

Hell: It being too late to do it.
Re: Heaven and hell... [message #1148620] Fri, 20 November 2009 10:06
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heaven - week off from school
hell - feel like crap


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Re: Heaven and hell... [message #1148627] Fri, 20 November 2009 10:14
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Heaven: Writing a beautiful Yami no Matsuei fic

Hell: Being impatient for people to read it so that I can write more chapter for it.
 Topic: Ban the person above you
Re: Ban the person above you [message #1148612] Fri, 20 November 2009 00:21
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Both Zar for leaving.
Re: Ban the person above you [message #1148622] Fri, 20 November 2009 10:09
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band noiz for being from america


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Re: Ban the person above you [message #1148629] Fri, 20 November 2009 10:15
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Ban Zar for the same thing!
 Topic: And then I...
Re: And then I... [message #1148611] Fri, 20 November 2009 00:21
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And then I had a burger.
Re: And then I... [message #1148623] Fri, 20 November 2009 10:10
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and then I found the person who stole my wallet eating burgers


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Re: And then I... [message #1148630] Fri, 20 November 2009 10:15
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And then I didn't do anything because I pinned on someone else earlier.
Re: And then I... [message #1148650] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:02
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and then I sit down and order a water, hoping its free


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Re: And then I... [message #1148652] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:03
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And then I splashed some in Zar's face. Laughing
Re: And then I... [message #1148663] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:12
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and then I go to the rest room to dry off


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Re: And then I... [message #1148664] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:12
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And then I bought a new kimono.
Re: And then I... [message #1148666] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:15
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and then I went home and read Cherry


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Re: And then I... [message #1148668] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:17
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And then I did a happy dance.
 Topic: Only truths
Re: Only truths [message #1148634] Fri, 20 November 2009 10:18
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I'm playing the Doors right now.
Re: Only truths [message #1148641] Fri, 20 November 2009 15:58
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I am gonna beta one of Noiz's fics Shocked Smile


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Re: Only truths [message #1148648] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:02
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I am so happy to hear that.
Re: Only truths [message #1148653] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:04
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I don't know where the fic is though Embarassed


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Re: Only truths [message #1148655] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:06
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I have my fic in my account here in the same name.
Re: Only truths [message #1148657] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:08
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I just found a page full of Noiz child and I don't know which one to read a new one or an updated one


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Re: Only truths [message #1148658] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:08
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I don't know which fic that Zar wants.
Re: Only truths [message #1148661] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:11
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I'm gonna read both of them then, I also find it very funny i'm having a conversation in the only truths thread


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Re: Only truths [message #1148662] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:11
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I'm playing the Pillows on my IPod.
Re: Only truths [message #1148671] Fri, 20 November 2009 18:36
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Dreaded Defiler ^_^
Moon Gazer
Stoic Ryu

I just ate about a whole pie of pizza by myself, save one slice, and it was small. . . . I've never felt better ^_^


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Guess what Shane? I can play the flute now. ^^

One day, I'll do it for you ^_~
Re: Only truths [message #1148672] Fri, 20 November 2009 18:50
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I'm surprised that someone other noiz and me posted on only truths Shocked


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 Topic: But...!
Re: But...! [message #1148610] Fri, 20 November 2009 00:19
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But I don't want to.

Sell your soul on Ebay.
Re: But...! [message #1148624] Fri, 20 November 2009 10:11
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but ebay don't take good souls

slap a stranger


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Re: But...! [message #1148631] Fri, 20 November 2009 10:17
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But I want to be successful in life

Sell your name on Ebay. (Last one, I promise!)
Re: But...! [message #1148646] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:01
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but its not worth anything

go out in public in tin foil evening wear


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Re: But...! [message #1148656] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:07
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But that's not comfortable.

Make-out with Keith Richards! Evil Laugh
Re: But...! [message #1148659] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:10
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but I want to keep my GF

go to Hawaii


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Re: But...! [message #1148660] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:10
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But I don't have the money.

Marry Mic Jagger.
Re: But...! [message #1148665] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:14
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but he's ewwww........

spin around really fast


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Re: But...! [message #1148670] Fri, 20 November 2009 16:21
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But I'm working.

Reunite Oasis!
Re: But...! [message #1148673] Fri, 20 November 2009 18:53
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but I want to get my band back together

write another chapter to Cherry Razz


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 Topic: Only Lies
Re: Only Lies [message #1148609] Fri, 20 November 2009 00:19
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I just wasted my time.
Re: Only Lies [message #1148625] Fri, 20 November 2009 10:11
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I'm not posting this


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