I am so glad that you gave him his rightful titles. I am also glad that Sessouhmaru was willing to give him the time, opportunity, and titles he deserved.
It's not a bad story. It does seem a bit rushed. The use of past tenses for words can be confusing in the English language. Next time just try to pace yourself and your story. No one who reads will rush you. Nevertheless, keep your enthusiasm and de…
I would love to read more. How and why is Inuyasha a slave? After what she just experienced, I am sure that all the other suiters will be found lacking.