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I truly enjoyed it. The characters are vibrant and full of life, but the disorganized writing and poor grammar make it difficult to understand. With improved structure and more polished dialogue, it has the potential to be an engaging story.
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I truly enjoyed it. The characters are vibrant and full of life, but the disorganized writing and poor grammar make it difficult to understand. With improved structure and more polished dialogue, it has the potential to be an engaging story.