it was the most funny chapter . Oh boy , I almost cried laughing at SAKURA and INOICHI scene and iris's glares . Also when Sakura went to Naruto . Oh I really love your story , the only thing i disliked is Hinata (and how you wrote her ) she is my current fav. character in series so I don't like when you call that she didn't love Naruto and when in next remake (on adultfanfic) you let her go with Anko . Rest everything better than series itself, bro you should really become a story writer for animes and hentais .
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it was the most funny chapter . Oh boy , I almost cried laughing at SAKURA and INOICHI scene and iris's glares . Also when Sakura went to Naruto . Oh I really love your story , the only thing i disliked is Hinata (and how you wrote her ) she is my current fav. character in series so I don't like when you call that she didn't love Naruto and when in next remake (on adultfanfic) you let her go with Anko . Rest everything better than series itself, bro you should really become a story writer for animes and hentais .