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Golden Apples for Raj Koothrappalli - Chapter 3, Other Fan Fiction | MediaMiner

SystemSystem
edited March 2022 in Story Comments Vote Up0Vote Down

Golden Apples for Raj Koothrappalli - Chapter 3, Other Fan Fiction | MediaMiner

Some four days And countless bands of Moon Spawn, Satyrs And Shadows later, they saw what they sought. Lots of beautiful large apple trees with wrinkled golden boughs, golden leaves And large golden apples. They were seen through huge old gates with intricate metalwork And over a tall stone wall in which the gates were.

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  • HeWolfHeWolf
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    I enjoyed your story. It's an imaginative tale puttting the BBT crowd into a new environment. Couple of minor points: Penny should have more than a dagger. No warrior carries a dagger as a primary weapon. Also, there's too much 'smirking'.

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