I loved loved loooved this fic. The plot and how it played out were all wonderful. And as I am sure you know it is a FREAKING nightmare to try and find PRaZr fics. So this was a real treat. I will say this though, as some friendly and well-meaning critique, you rushed this story a lot. It could have been much more drawn out and suspenseful and thought out. But other than that! Good Job! You should consider putting your work on ao3. You'd get a Ton more traffic and comments.
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I loved loved loooved this fic. The plot and how it played out were all wonderful. And as I am sure you know it is a FREAKING nightmare to try and find PRaZr fics. So this was a real treat. I will say this though, as some friendly and well-meaning critique, you rushed this story a lot. It could have been much more drawn out and suspenseful and thought out. But other than that! Good Job! You should consider putting your work on ao3. You'd get a Ton more traffic and comments.