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Sonic: Hentai - Shadow x Rouge, Sonic Series Fan Fiction | MediaMiner
Sonic: Hentai - Shadow x Rouge, Sonic Series Fan Fiction | MediaMiner
Author's Note: Okay, I'm just seeing how well I do here. Fanfiction.net are idiots who have fascist single mother period moods and can't tolerate any hentai, so I posted it here. This fic WILL have straight, yaoi and yuri, so if you can't stand that stuff, don't bother reading it.
Comments
It was cute. One big pet peeve of mine is when an author talks to me during the story. Try to keep your 'passive voice' out of it and write as much in the 'past tense' as you can. And when someone new starts talking and or doing an action, it's best to space it out. At the end there, I thought Shadow was moaning his OWN name. XD
Good fic. Solid idea. Keep writing. You got this.